Monday, 12 August 2019

Soccer

On Wednesday we play Soccer it was fun.
I liked Soccer because I liked to get the bull off the other team.
I enjoyed playing the other team.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 13:44

    Hi Ocean
    I like your background and picture. I also like the way you explained why you liked the game.
    Maybe next time check your spelling and see if it makes sense before you post. From Kohe

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  2. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 13:53

    thanks you Kohe

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